Friday, 23 December 2011

kissing Of Couple









Disaat ku petik bintang di langit,tak ku duga di cium awan,

Disaat ku ingin membalas ciuman,Bulan pula memberikan senyuman,

Disaat ku menerima ciuman & senyuman,


tatkala itu lah Matahari memberikan sinaran,


tanda merajuk cemburu.






P/s:kritik itu mudah tp seni itu sulit (^_^)

15 comments:

umie naziera said...

pergghhh ayat!!!

Juliet_iRa~" said...

wewitt.

puitisnyaa..

blh jd penyair..:)

Miss Purple Ungu said...

jiwangnya ayat2 tu :)

emy zulaiha said...

wewiitt~jiwang lah..
tapi emy xphm la.kesiannye emy!! :p

Original CikTeddy said...

msti ramai peminat ni..huhu
dlm bnyk2 agak2 nk pilih yg mana ek?

Teenager Housemaid said...

wahhh..
ayat yg sgt puitis..
tapi, mendalam maknanya..:p
jgn rambang mata yea..hehehe

Ainn Hazwany said...

wahhh , berjiwang :)

cik ika said...

jiwang sokmo.~~

era kecik said...

pewwiiitt. :P

CintaKhadijah said...

wah3~~ pic memng betol2kena lah. hahaha.. 18PL. ^^p

CintaKhadijah said...

twiesties, bile nk letak shoutbox? baru bleh manje2. kuang3!

CintaKhadijah said...

adeh.. dpt x email ck? ulardaun@gmail.com..

cik wanie Lovela (CWL) said...

bestkanada cple hermmm

TwIstiEs*meSti Mau* said...

hahaha,.....peace no war~~~~

my larling10......hahaha....
try to be yourself & enjoying your life..
who know tomorrow never meant be :)

Eera Shera said...

jiwang ngat haha ;)